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D-chain's right.

I detect offbeats. The bass needs some fixing on the notes. [0:18~0:27]

CRomDayLeR responds:

ye, thats right with the bass, I will try to fix it ;)

thx for the review

Well, you know..

...they're just jealous of your awesome work. Just ignore them haters. Keep moving up, gettin' famous. Good luck, bro. ;)

Lejin responds:

Yeah when people see you doing what they wish they could creatively they get frustrated and jealous. I only respect the truth! Thank you.

- Mr. Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
- Almighty Records (2010)
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Nice one!

The intro is a little hard for my liking, but at 0:35 and 0:47, it gets better.

You can try re-EQing the sweep at 1:06. It's too spinny and if you hear carefully, It's a little buzzy too. Your main synth lead could be buffed up a bit.

Other than those, good job putting this up together.

Tight.

Dis da shit maan. Imma explode this hard on my bass.

WTF.

Why is this 0 bombed? Deserves to be better scored.

Lejin responds:

Theres a mental unstable computer kid very disturbed and upset by the truth. He thinks 4 dick riders are all it takes to be popular on here hahaha nobody loves him.

- Mr. Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
\--------R.O.F.--------/ (President)
~Facts Kill Frauds~

It's good.

Quite simple though. But anyways, good job.

Gucunuka responds:

Ye I know mate but its a demo I plan to improve on it

Review.

I don't like the hardstyle vocals. :s I think the robot vocals would sound better. Or you can try without adding the hard vocals.

Did you sidechain the acapella? zlarke is kinda true with that. It also sounds small, but weirdly punchy. You can EQ the kick or just replace the it. Play around with your packs more.

The bass is awesome. Very Hard Dance/Trance -ish. Love that.

Use of effects here are excellent. Can't argue with that and your mastering is almost perfect.

Other than that, great job. :)

ShootingStar responds:

Awesome :) Haha I have messed with the kick - just haven't updated it :P But the vocals are not supposed to be sidechained - trying to get too much kick :P oops :D
Glad you liked the bass :) Made it myself! And I'll definitely take out the hardstyle vocals :P haha It was just for fun :P
Thanks for the great review!!

ShootingStar

Good one.

Intro is quite nice. IMO, the lead is a bit buzzy, and a little dry. EQ it a little. Ambience-like pads are so-so. Blip-like sounds at around 1:40 could be spiced up more. Other than those, good job. :)

ShootingStar responds:

Sweet :) I"ll definitely change those things and post a new version! Thanks for the review! Appreciate the feedback!

ShootingStar

Awesome.

Nice bass you got there. :)

Impressive.

Intro's rev cymbals were tad cheesy for me, but everything else is almost perfect. The mastering is awesome enough for me. Kinda repetitive though. I guess your should work on you variations more. Anyways, keep up the good work. :)

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