D-chain's right.
I detect offbeats. The bass needs some fixing on the notes. [0:18~0:27]
D-chain's right.
I detect offbeats. The bass needs some fixing on the notes. [0:18~0:27]
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Nice one!
The intro is a little hard for my liking, but at 0:35 and 0:47, it gets better.
You can try re-EQing the sweep at 1:06. It's too spinny and if you hear carefully, It's a little buzzy too. Your main synth lead could be buffed up a bit.
Other than those, good job putting this up together.
Tight.
Dis da shit maan. Imma explode this hard on my bass.
It's good.
Quite simple though. But anyways, good job.
Ye I know mate but its a demo I plan to improve on it
Review.
I don't like the hardstyle vocals. :s I think the robot vocals would sound better. Or you can try without adding the hard vocals.
Did you sidechain the acapella? zlarke is kinda true with that. It also sounds small, but weirdly punchy. You can EQ the kick or just replace the it. Play around with your packs more.
The bass is awesome. Very Hard Dance/Trance -ish. Love that.
Use of effects here are excellent. Can't argue with that and your mastering is almost perfect.
Other than that, great job. :)
Awesome :) Haha I have messed with the kick - just haven't updated it :P But the vocals are not supposed to be sidechained - trying to get too much kick :P oops :D
Glad you liked the bass :) Made it myself! And I'll definitely take out the hardstyle vocals :P haha It was just for fun :P
Thanks for the great review!!
ShootingStar
Good one.
Intro is quite nice. IMO, the lead is a bit buzzy, and a little dry. EQ it a little. Ambience-like pads are so-so. Blip-like sounds at around 1:40 could be spiced up more. Other than those, good job. :)
Sweet :) I"ll definitely change those things and post a new version! Thanks for the review! Appreciate the feedback!
ShootingStar
Awesome.
Nice bass you got there. :)
Impressive.
Intro's rev cymbals were tad cheesy for me, but everything else is almost perfect. The mastering is awesome enough for me. Kinda repetitive though. I guess your should work on you variations more. Anyways, keep up the good work. :)
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